Wednesday, 15 October 2014

The Whangarei Wave Pools Story

The holidays

Last Sunday I went to Whangarei wave pools. It was exciting. After that we went to McDonald and then I started to get full from the McDonald we had. I was ready to explode! We had ice cream after McDonald. We traveled by car and I was slowly drifting off to sleep, but then i woke up when we got to KeriKeri. We went to my aunt's house. It was exciting when I saw my aunt and then we went back home. We had a sweet creamy hot chocolate when we got back home. It was delicious!

2 comments:

  1. Hi Dale I love your holidays story. Remember to put a capital letter for the I because it's talking about you. Use a hook to grab the audience.

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  2. hi dale i love your story but you need to tell the truth about the hollidays

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