Friday, 8 August 2014

show not tell

WALT show not tell in our writing



His legs was shaking and shivering.  He could not move he was standing like a rock and frozen like ice bending down scared

and frightened.  As he was thinking out of his head where’s that misty nus coming from.


For the past few weeks we did show don't tell we need to get up and show the adents not telling.

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