Friday, 8 August 2014

Show don't tell

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As he was walking thru the dark and misty air the trees with sticky gul on it felt disgusting he could feel breathing on his legs suddenly he stopped there were witches flying around and devils  walking around him and zombies eyes are creeping out blood, all of a sudden he stopped he could feel red sand creeping up his leg and creeping up his back he started to shiver and then……. 

Last week we were doing show don't tell we need to leave the adents hanging.

   

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