Friday, 8 August 2014

roller coaster ride

add detail to our writing to make it interesting to our reader
Success Criteria

- use descriptive details (use brainstorm above)

- starts with something that was said or thought

- use expressive vocabulary

- describe the event so the reader feels as though they are there

- use different sentence beginnings and types

OH NO this is the best bet in my entire life WOOHOO rrrrrrrrrr WOOHOO WOOOOOO hay ooooooooo no WOOO we’re going back in time WOO i’m hanging upside down i’m going to fall  out noooooooooo hold on tight noo it’s over now

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