Wednesday 18th august 2014
WALT - Show not tell to describe and expand on one feature of our character.
JohnJohn had lion legs when ever he stomped his legs would squirt out dark pink glowing blood that would always dry up and would not come off. His feet would always twist and not get back into place. He would always waddle like a penguin. Every time he would wobble he would always grow green glowing hair on his legs. Whenever he trips over the dark pink glowing blood would drop everywhere. every time he walked he would walk slow and if someone was hurt he would step on them to get more dark pink glowing blood back.