Friday, 25 July 2014

What i should do betta

What was your best moment in term one? Why?
We got to learn how to do blogs.


What was the most important thing you learnt?
How to use your chromebook properly.


What subject do you do the best in this term and why?
We got to learn how to file it and make a copy.


What subject did you not do so well in and why?
How to make a copy and file it.


Did I manage my time wisely this term? How? e.g. finishing most tasks, working independently. It is yes.                                                                                                                                                                     




What can I do differently next term to improve? Why?
Do my work properly and give myself a tic.


Give yourself smiley faces out of 10 to show how well you have done this term:


5/10  =

The Spooky greasy witch


WALT
add detail to our narrative writing to make it interesting to our reader

Success Criteria



- use descriptive details (use story web)


- use different sentence beginnings and types


- use expressive vocabulary


- describe the event so the reader feels as though they are there


- create a narrative



25th July 2014
One time in a old classic cottage made with sticks and twigs a little girl called Christy she was starving to death she was so hungry that she kept asking her mum Jill if she can have a apple and she said yes but the apple was a ponsness apple was light red color inside it had a seed in it that was ponsness and it turns her into a with a long nose greasy face and long babbley legs and her witchy brum is old and rusty as.  As she was eating the apple she stop eating it when she took a bit off it.  Firstly her face was turning greasy secondly her legs went babbley lastly her nose turned long and bumpy. As she was walking thru the old greasy stormy forest she was looking for something to eat as she stop walking she sat down and she was looking around she found a potion shop she went in it she found these book at the very last page it said do twenty push ups and eat a rose and then she turns back into a girl.

Taking Care of Teina















  • What you were doing
  • Why you were doing it
  • What you think you did well
  • What you think you would do better next time
  • Make sure it is your BEST work!


Thursday, 3 July 2014

A story

3rd July
WALT
Describe the concept of hiding, using our senses
Create our writing to make it interesting to our reader by using our senses
Success Criteria


- use descriptive details (Explode the moment)

- starts with something that was said or thought

- use expressive vocabulary

- describe the event so the reader feels as though they are there

- use different sentence beginnings and types


As i was speeding down the wall way and looking   for a hiding spot i could here my sister counting down from ,ten , nine, eight, seven, six, five, four, three, two, one, zero ready or not here i come.  I quickly found a hiding spot i hide in there as quick as i can fu i said to myself oh that took a long time to find this spot OMG as i went in the spot i could here my sister big foot steps when i went in the corner i was shivering.
I wanted to get out of the spot so i quickly jump up and went in the hiding spot and i was so hungry as i wanted to get up uuu theres a daddy long legs on me get it off get it off hurry hurry uuu i got it off OMG that was scary as uuu so i squished  it and uuu yellow stuff came out of it it was disgraceful uuu yuck this place gives me the creeps this place that i'm n uuu.