Friday, 6 June 2014

Dales Success Recount

You are going to write a descriptive recount, telling our audience about a time you were successful.  
Describe a time we were successful
Success Criteria
Have you remembered…
- start with something that was said or thought
- Use punctuation (capital letters to start sentences and names and fullstops to end)
- to put everything in the right order
- use describing words and lots of detail.
- Re-read it to check it makes sense

I hope i don't make a mistake i said to myself when i got up sat up on stage when we were doing the bongos people said woohoo that was wonderful performances up on tawaranui. Next we did the certificates and then we did the red and yellow and real caught being goods lastly we did the karakia then we went back to class to get a treat from our awesome teacher our assembly was cool.

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